Week 11 objective - Self Evaluation Template

Self Evaluation Template

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

0 points - The first draft is inadequate

I think I deserve 1 point. I included all elements of the classical argument. However, I think my first draft isn't enough thoughtful to an effective persuasive essay. 

2) What did you do well?
I did well on my research. I did 10 researches to support my argument.

arguments are based off of opinions and personal feelings.
3) What could you have done better?

I should modify my organization a little. Also I have to connect my reasons more logically.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

I did my best on my narration. I explained the background and explanation very well.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

My conclusion should be improved. I think my conclusion may be interpreted as a summary of my essay.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? My narration is strong. I do a good job explaining the foundations of the issue, and I prepare my audience to hear my argument.

I think the best thing I can do for my essay is rewrite my outline. Because I think the organization is very weak, and I think I have enough research for my essay. The last thing I should do is rewrite my confirmation and conclusion. I think my conclusion has nothing memorable or interesting part for audience. So, my plan is 1) Rewrite my outline 2) Rewrite my confirmation 3) Rewrite my conclusion. Also whenever I think my essay needs more researches, I'll do it!