First Draft 2 Points
Great thesis! It is clear, interesting and debatable. Your introduction is very informal, though. Reread the introduction instructions and try to make it stronger.
You need to connect your confirmation to your thesis better. How does ability grouping affect happiness? How does standardized testing relate to ability grouping? Is your essay about student happiness or ability grouping or what? You need to focus on one of these points to write a very strong essay.
Great start. Focus on targeting your essay towards supporting your thesis, and it will be very strong.
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