2014년 12월 7일 일요일

Week 16 objective - Final Draft!

Is Ability Grouping really necessary for students?


It is true that Korean students are suffered from academic stress the most. According to the Korea Bang Jeong-hwan Foundation and Social Development Institute at Yonsei University said that Korean students' happiness degree came to 65.98 points in 2011. In other words, only 6 of 10 elementary school students feel happy about their lives. Surprisingly, it is the lowest among 23 OECD member countries. Also a researcher of the foundation said that Korean students' happiness is low because they are under great pressure to study. Even, elementary school students also get stress from studying. One reason why Korean students get stress is 'ability grouping'. Korean government implemented ‘ability grouping’ because of 7th revised education curriculum until 2009. According to it, every Korean school started giving lessons with ability grouping. I strongly argue that, every school should NOT give lessons with ability grouping.

Ability grouping, also known as tracking, is the practice of grouping children together according to their scores. Korean government implemented ability grouping to enhance the effectiveness of education. Government’s original intention of it is that they can get help more from their friends and there will be increased scores if students get class with friends who have similar academic talents with them. If ability grouping has implemented according to this original purpose, there is no reason to disagree with it. The problem is that, however, ability grouping has not implemented like government’s original intention. Most teachers in schools claim that ‘ability grouping’ which government intended cannot be realized in reality. Jeong Eun-kyun, a teacher in Korea middle school, said that ability grouping justifies the way which dividing students according to their academic talents. 

There is an interesting experiment about ability grouping by King’s College. The experimenters divided students into five groups according to their academic scores. From students’ interviews, we can assume that ability grouping gives much stress to students in every levels.  
I mean I get really depressed it really depressed me, the fact that everyone in the class is like really far ahead and I just dont understand. Yeah cause like especially when everyone else understands it and you think Oh my God Im the only one in the class that doesnt understand it If you dont understand something, then its just like, you know, it really depresses you. (School F, 1st level, girl). 
She was in high-level group. Even though she was in high-level class, she said she was depressed, because she felt that she couldn’t understand the class only. Many people think that there is no depressed students in high-level class because they are estimated ‘high’ level from school. However, even in high-level class, they also get much stress because they think that they are ‘underachievers’ themselves.
The SATS were hard because our classwork is so easy, so we hadnt done it.I want to be brainy and go up and be good at maths, but I wont go up if the work is too easy. (School R, 5th level, boy)
He was in low-level group. Because he was in low-level group, he had no chance to get high-level math class. It can be interpreted that ability grouping violated the right to be educated. Every student has right to learn what they want, but ability grouping violates that boy’s right to learn what he wants. 

Ability grouping does not lead to students’ increased scores. It is the most serious problem of ability grouping. Korean government said that every school should give lessons with ability grouping because it is helpful to increase students’ academic scores. In other words, if there is no reason to give lessons with ability grouping. Unfortunately, it is true that there is NO positive effect originated from ability grouping. More than 2000 fifth and sixth grade public school students in New Your City provided the data, over a two-year period, upon which the conclusions are based. According to this data, the ability grouping had no significant effect on academic achievement. Differently with the original purpose of ability grouping, it has no positive effect on students' academic ability. Rather, it has many negative effects to students. It means, Korean schools don't have reason to implement ability grouping. Therefore, I argue that every school should NOT give lessons with ability grouping.

Ability grouping also makes inequality of education between studentsThe National Education Association believes that the use of discriminatory academic tracking must be eliminated in all public school settings (NEA Resolutions B-16, 1998, 2005). Adam Gamoran insisted that, more experienced and qualified teachers are assigned high levels when schools divide students according to their academic scores. Also, according to Nicholls in 1989, ability grouping makes inequality between students.

Plenty of people, especially parents of students may disagree with my opinion. They may think that ability grouping can improve student achievement. However, as I mentioned before, ability grouping had no academic improvement. In addition, they may think that ability grouping has lots of advantages. But, even though there are some advantages, it should not implementAccording to investigation from George, in 1988, 85% of the research says ability grouping is not beneficial. Also, ability grouping does not do what it is expected to do with majority of the students. Finally, according to Nicholls in 1989, ability grouping makes inequality between students.


It is not hard to find sources that ability grouping is not good for students. Today, Korean students are suffered from studying and they get stress from it the most in the world. Even in Korean society, elementary school students also get stress very much from studying. This is because every Korean school started giving lessons with ability grouping. Ability grouping not only makes students get stress from it but it also makes students feel they are under achievers in studying. Ability grouping isn't good method to implement in every school. Therefore, I strongly argue that every school should NOT give lessons with ability grouping.





<References>

Standards, Inequality & Ability Grouping in Schools
http://www.ces.ed.ac.uk/PDF%20Files/Brief025.pdf

The Disadvantages and Ability Grouping : A Look at Cooperative Learning as an Alternative
http://www.dropoutprevention.org/sites/default/files/SS05.pdf

Research Spotlight on Academic Ability Grouping 
http://www.nea.org/tools/16899.htm

The Effects of Ability Grouping
http://eric.ed.gov/?id=ED031536

Did you get any benefit from ability grouping? (수준별 수업으로 재미 좀 보셨나요?)
http://www.ohmynews.com/nws_web/view/at_pg.aspx?CNTN_CD=A0001828810

Elementary school students also have 'sad' ability grouping (초등학생도 눈물의 '하'반)
http://www.hani.co.kr/arti/society/schooling/294144.html

Students experiences of ability grouping - disaffection, polarisation, and the construction of failure.
http://www.nottingham.ac.uk/csme/meas/papers/boaler.html

Implementing ability grouping in EFL contexts : Perceptions of teachers and students

http://ltr.sagepub.com/content/16/3/289.abstract

Korean students least happy in OECD

http://www.koreatimes.co.kr/www/news/nation/2011/05/113_86432.html

We don't need quite so much education
http://www.koreatimes.co.kr/www/news/nation/2011/05/113_86432.html


2014년 12월 6일 토요일

Week 14 objective - Peer Review 2

Peer Review for 20509 박상후


Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
4점! classical argument 형식으로 에세이가 깔끔하게 잘 쓰였다.

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
구체적인 자료들이나 통계들이 더 많았으면 좋겠다


Thesis
What is the thesis?

Government should not censor all music with violent or explicit lyrics.


Is the thesis clear and debatable?
Yes!


If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
똑같이


.Any other thoughts?
NO

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
Yes

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 
Yes

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
Yes


Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
Yes

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
Yes

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 
Yes


What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
Perfect classical argument structure!


Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 
Disagree

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
Agree


If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
에세이에 써있는 대로 music censoring이 음악가의 표현의 자유를 침해한다는 점에 동의하고, 음악 검열을 하지 않아도 범죄율이 증가하지 않는다는 것이나, 음악을 듣는 아이들에게 교육을 하는 것으로 음악검열을 대신 할 수 있다는 점에 동의한다.

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
구체적인 통계자료가 더 많으면 좋을 것 같다

Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
Yes

Is the research from appropriate sources?
Yes

Are the sources obvious?
Yes


Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
Yes

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
Yes

Week 14 objective - Peer Review 1

Peer Review for 20508 민효민


Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
4점! classical argument 형식으로 에세이가 깔끔하게 잘 쓰였다.

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
영어 교육이 지금과 같다면 문제라는 의견에는 충분한 근거들이 있지만, 왜 현 영어교육이 지속된다면 한국이 글로벌 사회에서 뒤쳐질지에 대한 내용이 조금 더 언급되었으면 좋겠다.


Thesis
What is the thesis?
If current English education system does not get to change in this way, Korea will fall behind global society.


Is the thesis clear and debatable?
Yes!


If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
Korea will fall behind global society if English education system would not change.Any other thoughts?

NO

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
Yes

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 
Yes

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
Yes


Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
Yes

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
Yes

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 
Yes


What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
Perfect classical argument structure!


Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 
Agree

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
Still agree

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
.

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
영어를 못하는 국가가 글로벌 사회에서 뒤쳐질 것이라는 사실에 대한 근거들이 조금 더 많았으면 좋겠다!

Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
Yes

Is the research from appropriate sources?
Yes

Are the sources obvious?
Yes


Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
Yes

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
Yes