2014년 11월 16일 일요일

Second Draft

It is true that Korean students are suffered from academic stress the most. According to the Korea Bang Jeong-hwan Foundation and Social Development Institute at Yonsei University said that Korean students' happiness degree came to 65.98 points in 2011. And it is the lowest among 23 OECD member countries or the third year in a row. Also a researcher of the foundation said that Korean students' happiness is low because they are under great pressure to study. Even, elementary school students also get stress from studying. One reason elementary school students get stress is 'ability grouping'. Nowadays, most Korean elementary schools start giving lessons with ability grouping. I strongly argue that, every elementary schools should NOT give lessons with ability grouping to lessen students' stress.

Ability grouping, also known as tracking, is the practice of grouping children together according to their scores. According to an experiment in King's College, we can infer how ability grouping makes students stressful. A girl who participated in this experiment said that, 
I mean I get really depressed — it really depressed me, the fact that everyone in the class is like really far ahead and I just don’t understand.
Yeah ’cause like especially when everyone else understands it and you think ‘Oh my God I’m the only one in the class that doesn’t understand it’
If you don’t understand something, then it’s just like, you know, it really depresses you. (School F, set 3, girls). 
Like she said, almost every student said that they got much stress from ability grouping. I strongly argue that, every elementary schools should NOT give lessons with ability grouping to lessen students' academic stress.

Except ability grouping, there are already many strange education systems which make students stressful. For example, there is a standardized exam called 일제고사 in Korean. Here is one example which exposures the compulsion of Korean education. In 20 January 2009, seven elementary and middle school teachers in Seoul have been fired for giving students and parents a choice about whether to take a standardized test - 일제고사. El General Secretary Fred Van Leeuwen said that "Across the OECD countries, teachers are becoming increasingly concerned about the uses and abuses of standardized testing and its vastly increased stress on students and teachers". This kind if standardized testing might raise unnecessary competition among studnts and give children a heavy, stressful burden. We can infer from this example that the South Korean education system is highly competitive, with government policy compelling all elementary and middle school students across the country to sit the standardized tests.

Korean education system makes students stressful. Even though Korean schools don't implement ability grouping, Korean students have the lowest happiness level of students between OECD nations. Further, after Korean schools start giving lessons with ability grouping, Korean students get more stress from it. The reason why Korean schools implement ability grouping is to make students study harder. Many elementary, middle and high schools in Korea started implementing ability grouping. Proponents of ability grouping say that the practice allows teachers to tailor the pace and content of instruction much better to students' needs and, thus, improve student achievement. In contrast, opponents contend that ability grouping not only fails to benefit any student, but it also channels poor and minority students to low tracks where they receive a lower quality of instruction than other groups. Also, ability grouping contributes to a widening of the achievement gaps. The National Education Association believes that the use of discriminatory academic tracking must be eliminated in all public school settings (NEA Resolutions B-16, 1998, 2005)

Then, is ability grouping really beneficial to improve students' academic performance? I don't think so. More than 2000 fifth and sixth grade public school students in New Your City provided the data, over a two-year period, upon which the conclusions are based. According to this data, the ability grouping had no significant effect on academic achievement. Differently with the original purpose of ability grouping, it have no positive effect on students' academic ability. Rather, it has many negative effects to students. It means, Korean schools don't have reason to implement ability grouping. Therefore, I argue that every elementary schools should NOT give lessons with ability grouping.



There may plenty of people who disagree with my opinion. First, they may think that studying is the most important thing for students. But, it is not true. There are many things more important than studying for students. According to some articles, we can find the other things more important than studying easilyFor example, there is an article names 'Why sleeping may be more important than studying". Like this article, there are may things more important than studying such as sleeping. Second, they may think that ability grouping has lots of advantages. But, even though there are some advantages, it should not implementAccording to investigation from George, in 1988, 85% of the research says ability grouping is not beneficial. Also, ability grouping does not do what it is expected to do with majority of the students. Finally, according to Nicholls in 1989, ability grouping makes inequality between students. Third, they may say that implementing ability grouping is a practice for middle and high schools. However, elementary school students don't necessary to practice to be middle school and high school students. Rather, implementing ability grouping may give elementary school students repulsion to studying. Therefore, I strongly argue that every elementary schools should NOT give lessons with ability grouping.

It is not hard to find sources that there are many things more important than studying, and ability grouping is not good for elementary school students. Today, Korean students are suffered from studying and they get stress from it the most in the world. Even in Korean society, elementary school students also get stress very much from studying. This is because Korean elementary schools start giving lessons with ability grouping. Ability grouping not only makes elementary school students get stress from it but it also makes students feel studying is boring. It is too fast to implement ability grouping to elementary school students. For elementary school students, studying can't be the most important thing. There are many things more important than studying such as sleeping, friendship, or family. Ability grouping isn't good method to implement in elementary schools. There fore, I strongly argue that every elementary schools should NOT give lessons with ability grouping.

2014년 11월 14일 금요일

Research 9

Source

Students' experiences of ability grouping -disaffection, polarisation and the construction of failure.
http://www.nottingham.ac.uk/csme/meas/papers/boaler.html

My topic

Every elementary schools should not give lessons with ability grouping.

What I hope to learn from this source

I want to figure out some disadvantages and side effects of ability grouping (tracking) 

Notes

1. Approximately one-third of the students taught in the highest ability groups were disadvantaged by their placement in these groups because of high expectations, fast-paced lessons and pressure to succeed.
2.  Students reported that they gave up on mathematics when they discovered their teachers had been preparing them for examinations that gave access to only the lowest grades.
3. significant numbers of students experienced difficulties working at the pace of the particular set in which they were placed.
4. I mean I get really depressed — it really depressed me, the fact that everyone in the class is like really far ahead and I just don’t understand.
Yeah ’cause like especially when everyone else understands it and you think ‘Oh my God I’m the only one in the class that doesn’t understand it’
If you don’t understand something, then it’s just like, you know, it really depresses you. (School F, set 3, girls) - interview with a girl
5I prefer groups when we’re all mixed up— like in form groups. ’Cause all mixed up, a variety of clever and dumb. So the dumb learn from the clever and then sometimes the clever can’t do it, so they’ll learn from people who aren’t as good, ’cause sometimes they’re good at some things but not others. (School W, set 3, boys)
 Classes should be mixed, then everyone can learn from everyone, it’s not like the dumb ones don’t know anything, they do know it, but the atmosphere around them in lessons means they can’t work and they just think to themselves — well, what’s the point? (School W, set 3, boys) - interview with two students about ability grouping. They disagreed with it.

Final thoughts

This research can support my thesis. It can be great supports that show disadvantages of ability grouping.

2014년 11월 7일 금요일

Sam teacher's advice

First Draft 2 Points

Great thesis! It is clear, interesting and debatable. Your introduction is very informal, though. Reread the introduction instructions and try to make it stronger.

You need to connect your confirmation to your thesis better. How does ability grouping affect happiness? How does standardized testing relate to ability grouping? Is your essay about student happiness or ability grouping or what? You need to focus on one of these points to write a very strong essay.

Great start. Focus on targeting your essay towards supporting your thesis, and it will be very strong.